chilling our days
and freezing us at night;
until we stop thinking of Fall, start believing Winter.
Intelligent people might
start changing ways;
This is a Saturnica. It has seven lines with syllable counts of 2/4/6/14/6/4/2 and a rhyme scheme of a/b/c/d/c/b/a. It is intended to represent the planet Saturn seen edge-on. If you are inspired to write one, please comment and leave a link so I and others may read it.